Thank You, really a good story line.

Another cliffhanger

Not a bad start but I hate when a single story is broken into pieces to sell more—makes me more determined not to buy! Also who edited this? A middle schooler could have done a better job—be professional and hire a PROFESSIONAL copy editor

The book blurb is a lie. It actually summarizes the SECOND book in the series, NOT the first. The fire at Lila’s apartment—literally the MAJOR plot point in the book blurb—is only ALLUDED TO in the LAST PAGE OF THE FIRST BOOK. The first book is just a long, meandering prologue. Don’t waste your time. Also, there are a crazy number of typos and outright errors. In one instance, one character is introduced in a scene using another character’s name; in another, Gavin is described as Tommy’s son (Tommy is childless and the same age as Gavin)…seriously huge errors that would have been caught if this book were actually proofread before publishing. The book’s only saving grace is that I didn’t have to pay for it. Still not worth it.

First, I must say I only read up to part of chapter four. It would have been extremely agonizing to read any further. This story has no structure. Characters are introduced every third paragraph. The dialogue is just rambling. There is absolutely no real, or even a hint at a storyline.

This was a great story and just when you get to like the characters and want to find out what happens next, the book ends. You have to BUY the other 2 books to complete what should be one book. Complete rip off.

Amateurish. Bad editing. Abrupt ending.

CLIFF HANGER.